Best novel I've read it has a solid development which is good for the character, with the setting of the world you set it can go further as he becomes stronger he can transcend his universe which can be of different mythologies to help spice itt up Oo if possible could you please change the mc Davis personality for as it goes on it will become detrimental to the story for as of right now even with all that power he is still a puppet for the grand puppeteers behind the scene Hey could you please continue working on the novel I would appreciate if you could be able to
Tangerines and Watermelons
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