Best read ever came through Hope it continues to grow into glory Keep the chapters coming [img=recommend] Ooh please try to bring in his family its been awhile since I saw them Don't forget his cultivation its bad to see the Mc get mopped the floor with in cultivation Thanks for novel all in all its great

Best novel I've read it has a solid development which is good for the character, with the setting of the world you set it can go further as he becomes stronger he can transcend his universe which can be of different mythologies to help spice itt up Oo if possible could you please change the mc Davis personality for as it goes on it will become detrimental to the story for as of right now even with all that power he is still a puppet for the grand puppeteers behind the scene Hey could you please continue working on the novel I would appreciate if you could be able to

Great characters design Nice character development Nice personality For me it suits a spot in my library I hope you continue writing[img=coins]

From the synopsis most likely he will be a guy who only follows his underpants which means he can easily be used by someone as such I think 🤔 he would not reach far in life