Review Detail of Harlos in PENANCE

The first chapter caught me off guard tbh and I didn't understand a thing. But towards the end of the first chapter it finally clicked! The story is interesting and exciting. Writing quality maybe needs some check in terms of grammar but beside that it's fine. Development of character as well as unfolding the world is enjoyabl p.s.: I hate Alagarassi. Seems like an annoying, arrogant woman