Review Detail of Leoff in Inhuman Warlock

I read 11 chapters, maybe an inexperienced author, maybe just not to my taste. In general, there are a lot of questions, why, why, why. Usually the author devotes little or much of the opening chapters to motives, cause and effect. Here a whole chapter is devoted simply to the guesses of two people who have nothing to do with the further plot, they go and guess, guess and go, what was that? Perhaps it will be better further, but I will never know. But thanks for trying) I'll put 3.8 just because I haven't read much, but I wanted to speak.