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Чёткий, дерзкий - как пуля резкий. Admiral-General Haffaz Aladeen
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Thanks a lot to the translator. But the whole chapter is just a squeeze of stupid misunderstandings. Waste of time, an attempt by the author to increase the volume. Remove all these surprises and explanations a thousand times and a normal novel will become, in 500 chapters...
True, if you take the absolute majority. The problem is that some people take everything literally.
The author is not aware that 6 billion players can drown any quest and any boss with saliva, and he is trying to tell us that they hung out there in one location. Also with the type of game, army recruitment. Damn, it just doesn’t fit in my head, how you can write such guano and not even blush. 10,000 active players, you can’t breathe, you can’t fart, so that no one is around. And this is even without NPC The world of 6 billion should be updated every minute, locations should be endless and edgeless, and also updated once a minute. You went to a concert or a football match, in each location there are 100 times more people, I don’t even want to imagine that. And the cities? It's only the players, but also the NPC and the army of players, well, fuck. Such writers cannot be without gigantism where it is not fucking needed, or come up with a plausible reason and possibility. There is also a problem with mathematics, in each chapter someone cannot multiply a number by 10,000. Always different answers are obtained. We are told in each chapter 90% of the time how cool and unattainable this whole, x10000 system is, and in the next chapter someone is already catching up. It seems to you that it cannot be worse, and you are at the very bottom, but then someone knocks from below. This idiocy hardly falls into the category of "wet dream of a schoolboy" and approaches the category of "I'm 30 autistic and I dream of feeding you shit, mimicking a writer." To all the defenders of this garbage, I want to say that it's very nice that you can find a plot where even the author did not foresee it. They save on your brain, you get dumber while reading this. I warned you.
Why doesn't he multiply his ego by 10,000 and win the game in half a day? For 10 chapters, he has already told his entire story. The rest of the chapters are needed so that he walks around and boasts to others, and also solves his petty insults from the last time? Pitiful little man.
I hope the author is aware that in order for a billion players to use 1 location, like this foggy forest, this forest must be dimensionless? And in general, the author or translator can use a calculator, the numbers are always different ... At the very beginning there were 500,000 points for the lord's task, now 300,000. Greedy little man.
A tale about an asshole who basically makes trouble wherever he goes. Good that he received from other people, remembers selectively. His serious behavior looks like a mentally retarded. It's even funnier that the author makes him look like a good guy when he solves problems. And the fact that he created 95% of these problems himself, the author tactfully (no) is silent.
First, where is his guard, who was appointed by his master for 100 years? Second, why is he so dumb? Joanna must know the names of those who were in charge of the academy and generally strong people when the kingdom was still intact. Does it bother anyone that the names will be the same as those that are there during their training? It annoys me alone how the author simply ignores common sense? And his stupid questions - "Hmm, it's strange why this or that one seems familiar to me?" And how did he behave in the world of illusion? And this is the best genius that has been chosen in the entire existence of their universe? Then if they are destroyed, the loss will be small)
I admit - the story is interesting, easy to read. But here is chapter 1018, and there the author subtly (no) hints that Su Ping is "the most prominent chosen one of all" universes "". Oh my god, he's an idiot, complete and total, what kind of universe is there if this is the best thing for its entire existence?)
Before google translate, it was funny.
Man, for example, I'm just toxic, I very rarely use comments just to thank the author for his work. Most often this is constructive criticism or stupid sarcasm. I see the comment function for just that. For frankly stupid stories - frankly stupid sarcasm. For interesting ones, I really try to look for errors in the logic of the narrative or those things that the author simply forgets about. You have an interesting story and I really like it. Thanks for the work you've done! I hope you don't give up because of bad reviews, they are not worth it. Focus on the good reviews, with such a cool fic there are many more I'm sure.
And what he is afraid of dying, obviously, no matter what the villains come up with, the author will "fix" him.
Better to die like his brother, like a dog? Two paragraphs ago it said he was an adult? Does not look like it...
Of course, it's disgusting to say this, I want to think people are better than this. Then you look around, sometimes at yourself, and it becomes clear - no, it’s not better ...
He would have eaten him, who knows where. Presumably, on Birka, where he was actually born and which he destroyed and only then came to Skypiea and the Upper Yard, where he defeated Gan Fall and took the title of God.
Remove the system and plot armor, who are you without it? - Just a corpse.
What a disgusting spit on the difficult fate of the liar Norland.
As a rule, no. Only schoolchildren have knowledge in all areas, and these schoolchildren would rule the world, but only in the morning they need to go to school ... I was just passing by, I decided to write my "pathetic" opinion.
Comrades, can anyone explain what happened in chapter 630? What happened to the author? I like assumptions and theories, but I have not found a simple explanation. Before that, it was tolerable, it felt like I was reading my own Google-translated texts (I’m bad with English, I use Google), but at least it was interesting. If you find out something, please write under this comment or just in the reviews, I want to know how it happened.