webnovel
Sasi_SomanLv13yr
2021-07-25 13:08

I have read till chapter 200 and the story has been fine albeit some inconsistencies here and there. There is not much descriptions about the world in itself. The character development is mediocre and the side characters has no depth. My man also has a rinnegan on the cover page.

Liked by 13 people

LIKE
Replies1
Noel_ElitiaLv1

try reading when i got reincarnated as a spider with my goddess you will not be disappointed

Other Reviews
Demonic_angelAuthor

Author Review! Alright, after 21 days of this book release and seeing the reactions, I think I am finally ready to review my book. So here it goes: Story Development: It's a Story about a boy who was thought to be powerless in a world where a lot of people awakened with various abilities. Pretty standard, right? But that's when things changed. Seeing that he was useless, they used him for their experiments to test how much pain a human body could bear. Unfortunately, this test didn't stop before he died. His body was tossed away only for him to Awaken finally, not with one ability but with many more. The kid who was thought to be a useless human was someone who was out for revenge. At its core, it seems like a revenge story, but it spreads out in many exciting directions, which I'm sure some of you will like. It's also a villain vs. heroes story where good variants and MC are on the opposite side. World Background: It's a story set in a modern world It'll be a profound and interconnected world. It's a world where Dungeons exist, but monsters can't come out of the dungeons. They can only come out when certain conditions are met. And to make sure that doesn't happen, there are various Organizations. It's also a world where people Awaken with power, so there are crimes involving them, and there are also heroes who stop them and catch the Dark Variants. The world will also involve many more things. I don't think any amount of words can explain it here. So please read. Character Design: I'm trying to make the characters unique, but you shall be the judge of that. I can't comment on this. Update Stability: Daily updates with bonus chapters every Monday or Tuesday. So 5 star :p Writing Quality: I try not to make any errors, but where there's a human, there will be errors, so please forgive me if you see one or two mistakes once in a while. Last Words: I'm sure if you come with an open mind to enjoy a story, you'll like it. It's a pretty interesting story, and it gets even better later. PS: Some people say the story gets a bit dark on occasions, so... reader's warned if they don't like that? But I don't feel like it's too dark, so please be the judge of that. (´;ω;`) Have a great day, thanks for going through such a long review Yours Obediently, Demo- Oh god, why am I writing it like a letter now? (ᗒᗩᗕ) JK, honestly, though, I hope you'll enjoy what you read. If you don't like anything, please comment or inform me in my DMs.

CelestialAlcoholicLv13
Related Stories

Misunderstood Villain: Heroines Mourn My Death

{Author Of Old-World Extra} "All untainted paths lead to the one truth." — There was nothing special about my life... except for how I died. I went out in the dumbest, most ridiculous way possible; even a dog’s death would’ve made for a better sight. But hey, that wasn’t even the weird part. Not by a long shot. For whatever reason, my soul had gotten ripped out and shoved into the body of some "Villain" in a faraway land. Yep, you heard that right. A clichéd "Villain." And I’ve got ten days before he’s publicly executed. This guy—well, I—used to be a Beggar. One that grew into a Magi, then a Seeker, then a Professor, and then... A Sultan. The one ruler of the entire world. Now? I’m stuck facing the people I used to love, ready to pay for all the “evil” I’ve done. Fate seemed Hellbent on ending me no matter where I went, but just as I was about to give up... A Script appeared before my mind’s eye. {Would you like to witness your real history, your Path?} {Would you like to make it past your Promised Day?} {Would you like to become a True King?} {If so, repeat after me…} It gave me one word—ancient, powerful, and clear. “BASSORĀH!” Many paths came together. Then, a projection appeared and it began to display... my memories? — This is a story about suffering. Anger. And forgiveness. {Volume One, Remember Me: Complete} {Volume Two, For Whom The Bell Tolls: Complete} {Volume Three, When the Sparrow Falls: Complete} {Volume Four, I Saw A Dream: Ongoing} Extra Tags: Drama, Reaction, Misunderstanding, Transmigration. Time Travel.

GoldenStache · Fantasy
4.9
134 Chs