@wakanda. you have to read a story to the end to be able to give such an opinion . I dont mind though. if it helps you feel better. feel free to look for something better to read. it's a free world by the way. Additionally , it doesn't cost much to be polite even in giving criticism . it might be actually quite helpful. otherwise, just enjoy the book. if it's not as per your taste, find something else which is to your liking. thank you.

He is not guilty at all. He only felt regret. Jasmine wouldn't have committed suicide if it wasn't for the insult, harass, rudeness and if his friends didn't play with her. I think he is not a coward but a puppet. His friend always manipulates him. He just obeys them for what they want him to do. How can he say beloved? Your story seems like too much fictional, i though based on true story. For sure, in the end, Lorenzo and Jasmine will still be together. Writer, if this is the end of your story, it will only lose its uniqueness.

I've only read 9 chapters. 1st impression - beautifully written with minor mistakes that edits can help. M skeptical though when I saw a piece that is still ongoing after 1 year. I'm hoping that the story is below or about 300 chapters

The story has two volumes. the first is complete and the second is on going. fret not. unless I for some reason can't completely write, I like to finish whatever I started. Hope you enjoy your read