ok, i like this kind style who use many narration from first pov(protag). For some reason, this is will be my inspiration about narration for my novel which is had deficiency for each chapter.
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LIKENr_Yet1208:But you should read a lot more novels (actual published novels). at first, you could just read typical light novels and then gradually switch to western novels. I'd suggest Slime, Jobless reincarnation, Rascal does not dream of Bunny girl senpai as a light read. but if you really want to learn narration sooner or later you'll have to read novels like six of crows and the poppy war. I wish you goodluck.
But you should read a lot more novels (actual published novels). at first, you could just read typical light novels and then gradually switch to western novels. I'd suggest Slime, Jobless reincarnation, Rascal does not dream of Bunny girl senpai as a light read. but if you really want to learn narration sooner or later you'll have to read novels like six of crows and the poppy war. I wish you goodluck.