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iridescentdream
iridescentdreamLv34yr
2021-04-17 15:42

The use of first POV made the MC's struggles more relatable to the readers. The world building is done well, and the vivid descriptions made it very thrilling and heart pounding to read. Kudos for updating this very often, too. Keep it up and good luck in the contest! ^^

Dawn- An age of Darkness

Nr_Yet1208
4.8
409 Chs

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Thank you. Means a lot to me.

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captiun
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Honest 7* review. Ah, I can't exceed 5 stars. What a pity. The writing quality is such that I was unable to find something to improve or correct. As for the story, it is depicted with such details and realism that I find myself being immersed in the world as I would watch a movie (and live it). I can perfectly imagine an anime or a movie being adapted from the book. Note also the insane frequency at which the author is able to write one chapter after another! That requires tremendous talent and dedication. So, you who is reading this review, please give all your power stones so that the author writes the rest of story. Shameless review from a reader that wants to know what happens next.

4yr

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Nr_Yet1208Author

1 million special!!!! First of all, thank you everyone for your continuous support. In recognition of that, I've released 3 chapters today. Next, I'm glad you're looking at this (yes, you, the reader.) I'll try my best to entertain you through my writing. And lastly, some answers. This is a dark fantasy so there will be plenty of blood and death. There will be romance but not a harem. The plot is favored over the length of the chapters, so some might be shorter than others but I generally try to keep the word count close to 1.5k Lastly, thanks again for picking this up. If you have questions, feel free to comment. Hate me? You can even send me hate mails. Address is in the bio.

3yr
Mel_Aniv
Mel_AnivLv4

This is a fun read! I didn't bore out after reading the first chapter and to my surprise, I already went to another pages! The first person narration was cut above the rest and I know the author was learning how to perfect his craft. This kind of novel was up to my alley and I like its dark theme. More power to you author as you pave this solitary journey. You got potential! You know that? 😉

4yr
Nr_Yet1208
Nr_Yet1208Author

What's up, everyone. I really love this story. Took me months to write and edit it. But I was patient and dealt with it. It's pretty big too. Hopefully, you'll like it as much as I did. Ps. It's a dark fantasy, so obviously there'll be blood. Muahahaha!

4yr
Bust_a_phobe
Bust_a_phobeLv2

I'm kind of in love with the mc and his struggles. At first glance, it seemed like any other fantasy novel, but then it began to dish out hard facts. But I like it and recommend to everyone.

4yr
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Announcement! We've finally reached 100k views! I'm gonna try extra hard from today, so please support me by voting. Your vote ensures that this novel reaches others. If you like this then vote, share or perhaps follow me on Twitter @nr_yet? I'm not gonna force ya, but it'll mean a lot. Cheers!

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Asphalt_Red
Asphalt_RedLv2

I liked the story pretty much. The mc development is actually quite good.I lowkey like how the story is advancing. Although there is always room for improvement 👍🤟

4yr
silent_agent
silent_agentLv11

Just read the first chapter. It's amazing. Too amazing perhaps. Jokes aside, this is a pretty good read. The first chapter was quite thrilling and I'm hoping the rest of it'll be solid too.

4yr
Nyan2
Nyan2Lv1

It's a pretty decent story. Probably not the best but not the worst either. The writing style is decent and so is the plot. I did enjoy some parts of it and hated other. Overall, a good read.

4yr
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