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Mangonade
MangonadeLv44yr
2021-05-10 13:14

I love the novel right away when I see this type of genre the author make such a good novel that I read all of them in one go. It's so interesting and beautifully written, the characters are all good too the ML aint a jerk which is great the FL is also strong Thank you Author for creating this can't wait for more

The Dragon King's Heart

ValestriaMoon
4.9
351 Chs

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ValestriaMoon
ValestriaMoonAuthor

Omg thank you 🥺😭 You’re too kind! I’m glad that you’re enjoying it! If you like, I also have another novel titled <New World New Life>. It’s a slow burn romance with more action and adventure elements. Thank you for your support! 😍

4yr
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Mangonade
MangonadeLv4

Would love to check it out keep up the good work 💞

ValestriaMoon:Omg thank you 🥺😭 You’re too kind! I’m glad that you’re enjoying it! If you like, I also have another novel titled <New World New Life>. It’s a slow burn romance with more action and adventure elements. Thank you for your support! 😍
4yr
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partime
partimeLv2

Author around how many chapters will ths novel have

ValestriaMoon:Omg thank you 🥺😭 You’re too kind! I’m glad that you’re enjoying it! If you like, I also have another novel titled <New World New Life>. It’s a slow burn romance with more action and adventure elements. Thank you for your support! 😍
3yr
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Nande_Boyce
Nande_BoyceLv15

Same question as @PARTIME😉 Not that I won't read the book

partime:Author around how many chapters will ths novel have
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Marie_Midnight
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I'm hooked! The FL is so strong! I love her determination. The ML is equal parts charm and devotion. Their interactions are always smile-inducing. The supporting characters are equally entertaining!

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good writing, good story there really isn't any negative to say nothing in the story seems forced or anything I'm always waiting for new chapters ❤️

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HoppingBunny
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Love the novel and definitely will be following how the mystery will be solved. Both FL and ML are well written and very likeable. 2nd characters are standing their own ground and are awesome. Highly recommend to vote for this novel to get more recognition for it!

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Ladurus
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I absolutely love the story. The characters are unique and intriguing. The story moves at a perfect pase and I like that the writer gives just enough description to leave the imagination to the reader. Definitely give the book a try.

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Taehwoo
TaehwooLv12

The novel had a promising premise and a lot of potential to be gripping, but unfortunately, it fell short in execution. The protagonist, while portrayed as highly intuitive and intelligent, often failed to connect the dots when the story blatantly laid out all the hints and clues. This inconsistency in her characterization made her actions feel frustrating and unconvincing. For someone who was designed to be sharp and capable, her lack of awareness didn’t align with the foundation of her character. The pacing of the story was another major drawback. Instead of building momentum, the plot dragged unnecessarily with filler chapters that didn’t contribute to the main storyline. This left the narrative feeling disjointed, with key moments overshadowed and lacking the tension they deserved. The climax, when it finally arrived, felt anti-climactic because the buildup was diluted by too much filler. Character development was a significant missed opportunity. At the beginning, the male lead had an intriguing presence, but as the story progressed, his personality fell flat, becoming one-dimensional and unengaging. The female lead suffered a similar fate—her character was initially oversold as extraordinary, but there was little growth or depth to back it up. As a result, their chemistry lacked spark, and their arcs failed to evoke any emotional investment. Overall, while the novel had an interesting premise and some potential for greatness, it was weighed down by poor pacing, lackluster character development, and missed opportunities to create tension and excitement. It’s a story that could have soared with tighter editing and a stronger focus on the main plot, but instead, it left me skimming through chapters, hoping for more substance.

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