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RuinedWorld
RuinedWorldLv23yr
2021-06-23 14:12

This book deserves more views. So far, its been an absolute hidden gem for me. The scenes are descrbed vividly and the words flow smoothly. Keep up the good work author.

A Desireless Agelong Migrant

UtopianLegend
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309 Chs

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UtopianLegend
UtopianLegendAuthor

I wholeheartedly thank you for sparing your valuable time to read and write a review for my work. I hope you find more gems as you skim through the myriad of creativity.

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UtopianLegend
UtopianLegendAuthor

Hey there fellas! UtopianLegend here. If you're a fan of otherworld adventures, give it a try. The auxiliary chapters are a detailed introduction to what is about to unveil. And yes, I am participating in Webnovel Spirity Awards. So let's pace towards victory together!

3yr

Currer
CurrerLv3

I don't find myself reading a lot of fantasy stuff, but this story is so good! The pacing is perfect and world building is well done. The writing style is smooth with incredible descriptions. Plus, the author updates often! Would recommend to anyone looking for something exciting. Good luck with the spiritys!

3yr
Lucien121
Lucien121Lv15

i get why he had to loose the armour it made him to op i guess but that was a real sudden change and honestly a stupid loss i began reading this today the beggining is chaos and is everywhere but got better after 30 40 chapters its to fast paced and has little to barely any explanations to vastly long explanations that yea we might wanna know but mostly filled with useless info its just idk its enjoyable till the latest chapters oh and thoughout it it seemed to drawdle with chapters it seemed like fillers they was pointless and honestly a waste of a few coins proboly wasted over 150 coins on those useless chapters

3yr
Kayastor
KayastorLv11

Everything is incredibly vague. By the time i got to chapter 10 I had no idea what was happening, who was talking, and where anyone was. We see the mc Find people, well kinda because he only see them talking. now by chapter 10 i dont even know if the mc is with them or talking to them or following them or even if they know hes there or not. Everything else seems fine but i cant read it if i dont know what happening. so you need to work on that and if you have improved in later chapters you most definitely need to rewrite early chapters becuase i can guarantee that its a major turn off for a lot of people.

3yr
TheDarkGod
TheDarkGodLv12

I have a question how evil is the main character

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Some_Drunk_Dude
Some_Drunk_DudeLv4

I’m just reading the first 20 chapters and this is indeed highly underviewed and underated. I just want to say keep up the good work and best regards.

3yr
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Hi! This is kerawood, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail. This contest is free entry.

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