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Christopher_Hill_Lv153yr
2022-01-27 19:40

Hopefully the author doesn’t delete my review. SPOILER The Mc was naive for a very long time.(100+ chapters)You can’t even give a proper excuse for that. He was almost killed more than the fingers on my hands, yet he still chose to trust people? He was told multiple times to not do so but he doesn’t listen. Then his friends try to kill him for the sake of their clans, and they think all is well? He’ll listen and forgive us? Like we didn’t try to kill him. The only question I have is “does he forgive them”. The plot was good at first but now it’s just not good. It was dragged out for way too long. Hopefully this novel gets a redo.

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Heelo! Author here. I am writing this book for the spirity Contest. I hope it will be to your taste. let's start with few salient features of this book- 1. Urban Fantasy guys... (I'm trying my hand at this genre) 2. lots of Magic ( including vampires, werewolves, mages, demons, gods, etc.,) 3.You need Badass Female characters, yes they will be delivered. 4. lots of side characters with their own story and ships to follow. 5.You want to dip to the Dark side, don't worry we will also go there. ( only occasionally you know, ) 6.Mystery and urban fantasy go hand in hand. 7.Mc is getting introduced to the magic world and so are you ( so no fear of getting lost ) ;-) just ride along Mc in this shaky novel to witness the action, thriller, mystery, and adventure. Yeah, there are love interests too. P.S-Happy reading guys, just enjoy your life......

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Naz_Mzf
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To add this story into your library just read the first chapter then you will realize how well written it is, keep on the good work Author.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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skyblue001
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I Will be honest I can not give an impartial review of this novel as Author is my friend. Therefore, this review is only for showing my eternal support to him. Keep going Author, we support you. And as for readers, I hope you give one try to his work for sure.....

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Anime_Antagonist
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This is the first review I have ever written after being on this platform for 3 years or so and that just how much I like this novel. Right now there are only 50 chapter or so and the story is great. The strength system is diffrent from the traditional eastern cultivation and is more western. No op main character and you can see some character growth from weakling to maybe a future powerhouse? The concept is great and interesting and i'm just saying try to give the book a read and it would be worth you time

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leonarco
leonarcoLv3

Imma just say i was here before 100k views. truly a great read with tons of potential. its only been 18 chapters but i can say that its unique and you wont regret reading it

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lankyflanker
lankyflankerLv1

A very interesting novel but as many have pointed out the grammatical errors are really annoying.Pls fix them asap atleast the first 30 chaps else it'll be a shame if this gem doesn't get recognition because of this simple mistake

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flanker99
flanker99Lv5

this story is a hidden gem.ive read all the way to chap 65 and so far my only complaint is with a few grammar errors here & there,tho im no english expert but it just gets annoying sometimes but there's clear improvement in later ones. good work author keep it up

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Kilua_Zoldick
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I only ask you to mention the power levels, as it is very confusing to know how strong the mc is[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

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