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Review Detail of Lucy_Carla in Minecraft Survival: ASOIAF

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Lucy_Carla
Lucy_CarlaLv42yrLucy_Carla

you read this fanfic, you feel the idea actualy not bad... but you so immerse in inner monologe.... so you just say whetever you want.... ..

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Minecraft Survival: ASOIAF

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Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv4Kwetzal_Lag

is this a joke on the 'you' when it goes in 3ed person?

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Lucy_Carla
Lucy_CarlaLv4Lucy_Carla

something like that... a little chaotic pov in this ff.., i try to imitate it...

Kwetzal_Lag:is this a joke on the 'you' when it goes in 3ed person?
2yr
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Kwetzal_Lag
Kwetzal_LagLv4Kwetzal_Lag

Makes sense, I couldn't go past like the 3rd chapter and just gave up. It does seem like a good concept and if people can look past that it's probably an awesome read, especially if the pov's got fixed

Lucy_Carla:something like that... a little chaotic pov in this ff.., i try to imitate it...
2yr
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