Review Detail of Pablo099 in Minecraft Survival: ASOIAF

first I will be very frank, the construction of the world is very good you have a lot of imagination, second you are writing me a summary not a story, third it hurts the head reading so many letters you are not separating many paragraphs makes it easy to confuse the progress of the novel, fourth, it would have been better that he himself made the team with some secret family volume etc. fifth has a world of resources so it is not impossible to do it also a story must start from the perspective of the protagonist and his surroundings in short, the novel has a very good idea but it is messy, my idea is that you write it by putting together the ideas you have already done but in another perspective