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cvu1706
cvu1706Lv103yr
2021-09-23 03:48

Very good story. Read up to chapter 46 so far. All characters seen in the story are well written that they come across as unique, real humans. I like the fact that the game is personalised to the character, making the game unique and gives a closer relation and meaning to the MC.

Falin Saga

Maomii
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8 Chs

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I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. Thank you very much for the review.

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Hi, Beta-reader here, All I can say is sit back and enjoy the ride, as the storytelling and writing style of Maomii is incredible, and watching her fanbase grow would fill me with a sense of pride. I'm proud to be a part of those that helped her accomplish her dream of being an Author. Proud to have witnessed the growth over the course of haven online and beyond as a beta-reader. And proud to be one of those that came to know what is to come. For those who haven't read or heard about haven online, pls expect chapters to be on the shorter side, but this won't subtract from their impact or the storytelling and helps Maomii keep the chapter uploads as steady as possible. And to Maomii: Be proud of yourself, don't listen to haters who can't read tags or descriptions. Those who realize what you want to archive will always have you back. If people often suggest the same thing, it doesn't automatically mean the change would be good. In many cases, it would make the work unoriginal. Write the story how you feel it should be and not how others want you to. **: STOP PROCRASTINATING XD

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I am really enjoying the story so far (chapter 13), I am also finding the character development incredible, I hope things continue this way because I am very expectant. I don't know how to do a review so that's it, I hope it is readable at least because I'm using the google translator haha ;-;

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