Review Detail of LordofMountains in Rebirth: King to Superstar

Item: Rebirth: King to Superstar
Rating: 3.2

Review detail

LordofMountainsLv32yrLordofMountains

I think the story is just not that interesting compared to others from the same genre the man was a king but his character is just like any average person also through the chapters he plays just a supporting role and instead of trying to improve himself and widen his view about the supposly different world to improve his acting he focuses in helping the formal female friend of the dead guy but the writing is consistent and that's an advantage at least but the characters are cringey to me especially the rich female girl that suddenly pooped out and saw something interesting in Mc without any prober reason just for the plot

Rebirth: King to Superstar

Cruchymonster

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Ngozi_OrjiLv11Ngozi_Orji

i know right that annoying unnecessary rich female character is really irritating , i really hope she's nothing but a side character that won't have much interaction with the mc in the future and most of all i hope she is not any female lead, i would be really disappointed if she were. other than that annoying character i really like everything else about the story, the pacing of the story and the interactions of mc with other characters except the annoying rich female character.. ( mc seems to be entertaining her , i hate that).

2yr

CruchymonsterAuthorCruchymonster

welp thanks for the read man. But did you read the Notice? I already said this isn't a fast paced book with the MC becoming good instantly. It will take time and that time was summer which is the present chapter starting at. So yah I already did kinda say it. Still hope you have a good day.

2yr

LordofMountainsLv3LordofMountains

Ah idont really read the notes most of the time but the thing is not about slow development for me but about the characters themselfs I felt like they are just bunch of fools taken from a chinese cultivation novel just present for face slapping and making the Mc and his friend looks good this is my honest review I hope you can work on that a little as for your writing consistancy and world background they seems good and idea is good too keep the good work up!

2yr