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LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv124yr
2021-04-30 21:59

Best novel on trial read this week so far, but that doesn't mean much. MC ability is so OP he could reshape the world in his favor, but he just goes around killing those that offend him and for some reason learns boxing. It would take one second for him to find out how to save his girlfriend, but no. He has to learn boxing. MC has the combined brain power of 3 fleas, but that is still not enough for him to avoid being identified literally the first time he acts. It is almost like the author gave the MC an ability that is too OP for the world, so he had to reshape his own creation to increase word count. For once I want an intelligent MC, who can actually do something without sabotaging himself at every turn.

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Matrixkrock
MatrixkrockLv5

if you want an intelligent mc within a novel of same premise as Saw/Final Destination, you should check out Adjucator of death. Although the plot of punishing the criminals gets a little repetitive in the later chapters, give it a try as it might be your cup of tea.

readtokilltime
readtokilltimeLv14

If you read it till chapter 20 you'll know he has searched for a cure but doesn't have that type of power yet

INVRLied
INVRLiedLv5

Read: - Dungeon Defense(KR) - Isaac(KR) - Ouroboros Record ~Circus of Oubeniel(JP) - Genius Prince’s National Revitalization from State Deficit ~ Right, Let Us Sell the Country(JP)

LightningCatThief
LightningCatThiefLv12

Thanks, will try the last 2

INVRLied:Read: - Dungeon Defense(KR) - Isaac(KR) - Ouroboros Record ~Circus of Oubeniel(JP) - Genius Prince’s National Revitalization from State Deficit ~ Right, Let Us Sell the Country(JP)
ThePotatoKing
ThePotatoKingLv14

and what power is enough?

readtokilltime:If you read it till chapter 20 you'll know he has searched for a cure but doesn't have that type of power yet
readtokilltime
readtokilltimeLv14

I read up to the 35 and what it's foreshadowing is him making his own underworld sect to get the power but, it's also showing us that there are mysterious groups and powers out there other than just his.

ThePotatoKing:and what power is enough?
Master_Celestial
Master_CelestialLv4

When you look, you notice something. Yes, there is no Chinese novel. What does that mean? Think about it yourself. 😉

INVRLied:Read: - Dungeon Defense(KR) - Isaac(KR) - Ouroboros Record ~Circus of Oubeniel(JP) - Genius Prince’s National Revitalization from State Deficit ~ Right, Let Us Sell the Country(JP)
KazeelBaYz
KazeelBaYzLv13

yeah but the translated novel ends at chapter 287 or something... I tried to read the MTL, but it was too much for my small brain,

Matrixkrock:if you want an intelligent mc within a novel of same premise as Saw/Final Destination, you should check out Adjucator of death. Although the plot of punishing the criminals gets a little repetitive in the later chapters, give it a try as it might be your cup of tea.
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