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Nicola_McBlane
Nicola_McBlaneLv113yr
2021-06-17 01:25

This is a terrible translation. I gave up on the story because of this. it regularly has chapters telling different versions of the same part of the story, immediately after each other. (for example version one the master is looking for a new disciple, sees a promising recruit, and the rest of the chapter tells of the recruitment. But the next chapter is version two so suddenly the would be disciple has come to the sect to apply for membership, and the master notices this promising disciple for the first time and the chapter ends with the recruitment, only for the next chapter to be version three of this scenario of the master recruiting the disciple.) I dragged myself through two loops like this, and I just can't go through it again. It's frustrating because I think the actual original story is really good so if the issues were fixed, or if a whole new translation was added to the site, I would definitely give it another shot.

Xianxia: My Disciples are Insane!

Baby Rush
3.3
533 Chs

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Webnovel_Bot69
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Teacher : How old is your father ? Kid : He is 6 years old Teacher : What? How is that possible? Kid : He became my father only when I was born.. Logic!!

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13th_Night
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Translator of this work heavily relies on MTL. The chapter orders are messed up. It's go back and forth. the same rank are also differently translated. I hope the translator do his work probably.

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SiegV
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5 star because it's a Master-Disciples type of novel. Hopefully it would be translated and not just be here as a false hope.................

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erikku
erikkuLv14

System novels are my guilty pleasures, especially those that have master and disciple progression models. Really looking forward to this hopefully it gets picked. 🌟

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LordInsanity
LordInsanityLv5

Chapter order is messed up Or the author has no idea on how to make a book One chapter the MC goes to some genius who's had his talent sealed to take him away, the next chapter the genius is taking the sect disciple admission test, the next chapter genius acknowledges MC as his master, the next chapter genius begs MC to make him his disciple. Either translator problem with chapter sequences or bad writing. MC has a sign in system with a disciple system Every special disciple he gets will give him a reward. MC reborn in a wuxia world as a direct disciple of a peak in a sect. Nothing else so far.

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Sid_Webbo
Sid_WebboLv2

I dont know what is even happening in this novel. Its like the TLs are putting the original version and a plagerised version in the same book. There are chapters where they are litterally just doing the same things with about 2 paragraphs words worth of difference. Dunno whether author or TLs are just trying to pad the chapter count.

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Mythfury
MythfuryLv6

Again people spamming 5 🌟 rating even before this Novel released any chapter. Storyline is interesting but translation Quality is bad...... I hope this will be good and more chapter released. such a few chapters doesn't show us much.

4yr
IAmWeed
IAmWeedLv13

Chapters are in badly need of proof reading How webnovel novels have degenerated .................awdqwqrhirheifshfsdifbsifhsofoiw;egfio;wheoifio;ahef;ioahef

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Skabold
SkaboldLv13

Some chapter are like X happend then next chapter they do X again but change the place, how people meet etc. Like author had 2 ideas but forget about it. Nobody ever proof read it and its awful. some chapters are in the wrong order. That kind of poor work is becoming more and more popular on webnovel....... Its sad cause master/disciple are one 9f my fav stuff

3yr
Drathys
DrathysLv15

Chapters are not in order, genders are not consistent, portion of chapters are pasted into others. Only those of the MTL DAO could enjoy this. It is to bad, because I liked the idea behind this story. But, I read for entertainment, not to solve literary complications. Maybe it gets better past C24. I won't know because there are plenty of other novels that put in the effort to satisfy their readers.

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