Review Detail of Victor_Suchy in Myriad Realms Store Manager System (Harry Potter AU)

The story is interesting and though the world travel has been done to death in other series the way it is implemented is not the average fictions. Instead of the protagonist hopping worlds to gain power and becoming instantly overpowered this story keeps the connection to them. With the deviation points he has the motivation to make an impact rather than following a timeline which should have already been derailed via butterfly effect. With him able to go back to previous worlds with his wares you become invested into his impact on that story overtime. The only thing I really dislike from this novel is that the MC as a College graduate is always second place to a grade-schooler. This is emphasized multiple times like the grades from elementary school, her spells always being faster to learn and better than his, and more recently the end of the year grades. Along with her jealousy and grudge against him from having better grades than her a few times make me seriously wonder if the MC is just simping for Hermione. I recall that somewhere in the chapters that he didn't want to offend her. This is not a healthy relationship and I cringe every time I see one of those events pop up. Other than that give the story a read. It isn't the best but it is somewhat unique.