Review Detail of MonarchOfSilence in Primordial Dimensions
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Heavily overrated for how bad the grammar is, sure superb world building and character development, but if you have to read thrice the same phrase to understand what the author wants to say I can't give it a higher raiting. What's so hard to get an editor? You can find a half decent one for little to no money. I am sure the money made on the novel can cover for an editor. Well my opinion.
Primordial Dimensions
HideousGrain
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Monarchofchaos:Really like the novel. And for the romance hopefully his love interest is not the fiancé I want the mc to follow a different route like he said. Not the cliche route where he’ll meet his fiancé with out knowing she’s his fiancé and get to know her.
Hope he does a good job, I like your story, only grammar is a slight issue. It doesn't bother me too much, but with better grammar, the story will be more pleasing to read. Sorry, if I expect too much, but please make your editor work fast!!!
HideousGrain:I already searched for an editor and hired one not long ago, but it will take some time before everything is edited.
I know you have a feeling the mc Is going to fall for his fiancé with out know who she is. Because it’s emphasised that he doesn’t know how she looks. It’s annoying if he does
mushroomheart:I hope so too...I dont want the MC to fall for the fiancee, it will be too cliche
Well, the author's last book wasn't a cliche so we can hope that the fiance is more of a necessary nuisance or provides some comic relief if nothing else ;)
Monarchofchaos:I know you have a feeling the mc Is going to fall for his fiancé with out know who she is. Because it’s emphasised that he doesn’t know how she looks. It’s annoying if he does
HideousGrain:I already searched for an editor and hired one not long ago, but it will take some time before everything is edited.
Hopefully but the fact he’s never seen her will play a role. And I almost know that he’ll meet her and not know it’s her because of it. Otherwise the author would of introduced her
mushroomheart:Well, the author's last book wasn't a cliche so we can hope that the fiance is more of a necessary nuisance or provides some comic relief if nothing else ;)