Item: Primordial Dimensions
Rating: 3.2
Author: Daoist5dpydN

Daoist5dpydNLv103yr

2021-10-08 17:47

Just started reading but my first impression of it was why add the whole transmigration plot? Couldnt he just have the blessing? And in doing so the whole story and behavior would make much more sense, I am not a fan of having an adult transmigrated mc behave like teenager. And the whole progression of the story is kind of slow and dull, its arduous to read, I kind of get trying to make it more realistic with the whole normal cultivation but that's kinda duft since this is fantasy and cultivation in itself is fantasy so why try to make it realistic, give me so fast boosts man, give me some thrill.

Primordial Dimensions

HideousGrain

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477 Chs

Liked by 8 people

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Iron_MLv14

The thing is tho, he never really acts like a teenager except in the very beginning when he leaves home to avoid the engagement

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WayrierLv11

true i didnt like it when he behaved like akid

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