The story is quite well written and a good plot line. The spacing is very good. I loved the characters and their dialogues but I feel that adding something about what's going on in the character's mind in some scenarios may make the readers more attached to the characters and also in some places I feel like the story bounced from one part to another a little abruptly. But the rest is great. It was a good read
Maryixxx
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