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Makayla_Reese_5987Lv143yr
2021-12-31 00:58

To be honest I really loved this book it started off very strong and it was developing well along the way but after the wedding nothing in the story makes sense. They switch the story like it just makes sense with out any explanation. They never go back to Luis and Marcella’s story not explain why it’s Vera and Luis now.

Villainess for the Devil

alienfrommars
4.5
129 Chs

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alienfrommars
alienfrommarsAuthor

That is because the story is under revision. At the end of every chapter, there is a notice about XXX mark onwards. meaning, The XXX marks on the title onwards are not yet revised. If you unlock them, you can clear cache and refresh the book to see if a chap is replAced by pRoper content. Thanks.

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It's well written, the intro is not too long. The characters are built perfectly, and the premise at once possible and simple. . I rarely read fantasy as well written as this one. I recommend it guys! I think I finally found a keeper for my library!

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Loved it ❤️💕❤️💕❤️. The writing style is very cool. Story development is really nice. Character design is at its finest. Keep up the good work author! Kudos to you! Loved it!

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The luxurious vocabulary and the syntax of the author's writing are what are really impressive! The storyline is common, but surely the author can weave it differently from how the other books are woven! Really tempting cover! An undiscovered gem! I rate it 5 stars because personally, I enjoyed my experience! I fall prey to books like these even though I am an author here! Best of luck!

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Laura0830
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So are chapters 1-17 the revised chapters? I am really enjoying Vera/ Marsella story line and hoping it contunes! Im a big fan of The Dukes Passion and looking forward to more from this author!

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Laura0830
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The banter between the characters is so much fun to read. The plot twist aren't frustrating "miscommunucation" type things but great surprises that keep you coming back for more of the story!

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Alazka
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I only got to read the revised version (currently up to chapter 20 or so). Absolutely loving it so far: really entertaining characters. I love the non-conventional, asserive heroine! Please keep going! Can’t wait to see where this goes!

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MatchaMilk
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Reading the synopsis already pulled me in and made me want to read more. I'm always in for a good romance and revenge story (with transmigration/reincarnation?) and this is perfect. First of all the writing style is great. It's descriptive and beautiful (tho there were a few mistakes here and there, with some editing its easily taken care of-some typos and tenses mixed up) . Especially the MC's feelings were vibrantly conveyed and as a reader I could feel and experience everything the MC did. (Although my own preference, 1st POV takes a while to get used to). Also, I wanted to learn about the MC's past a bit later than have it all revealed in the first chapter, because it felt a bit of exposition (but who am I to talk?) I love the MC, she feels strong at the beginning but then more realistic. However, I am a bit surprised at her change from the first chapter to the later ones, while I do get that after she entered a new body and became confused, I still felt a bit down seeing the cliche of the female lead being weak in front the male lead. None of her strength is really seen, and I do hope the MC can use her powers again and not play along the whims of the ML (and focus on her revenge). The ML is more or less of the cliche overbearing and possessive type, although like MC mentioned he has many different sides which is interesting. Let's see how they develop as characters and their relationship. The story development is also well-done, not too slow or fast, and the world building also shows promise. Excited to see how powers/magic will play into everything, and how the world works. All in all, a very great and beautiful story, that is a pure gem not left to be unread!

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mango121
mango121Lv3

To be honest, the starting was really great. The character of the female lead was what got me more and more interested. But I feel like after the wedding the story is getting more and more predictable and I don't feel that excitement anymore. Also with the character development, the female lead is losing her own charm, just becoming some typical female lead. Though I am still liking the plot twist.

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