Review Detail of Lieutenant_Fluffy in Duality or destiny?

Really fun stuff from the start, characters talk with each other in a fun way, giving them a lot of life. Nice build-up of intrigue as well! Everything moves at a natural pace and it doesn't feel like too much is thrown down straight away. Really good so far, and the author has already mentioned about tidying things up later, so I'm sure the quality and consistency of writing will naturally pick up as well. Well worth giving a go if you're into the scene!