Review Detail of S0rcer0r_supreme in Duality or destiny?

I have read the story from beginning and it touched my heart. But I feel pity on the female lead character, Lina. She is leading a very miserable life. You have to make a happy ending for her as she suffered a lot from beginning. In my opinion, she deserve it. Rest of your choice. But really nice story excluding some of grammatical problem. Hope you will fix it. Thumbs up!