Item: PK Period
Rating: 4.2
Author: Grant_L

Grant_LLv143yr

2021-05-02 13:55

I like The concept and story backround so far. A few things that kinda put me off was the lack of a goal for the mc or a clear direction the story is going towards. It seems like he will do anything given to him due to a lack of Character Debth. idk if this will be solved later, but I hope it does. Lastly i found how everything seems skripted as in the mc goes into a quest and its like “kill 10 boars” and “kill boss”. I mean with a game with free thinking ai and super developed mechanics im sure they would make more interesting quests and paths that make experiences right? Anyways still enjoying the book and I hope it continues.

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