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Proteety_Promi
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2021-05-24 17:53

Writing quality is great! Like it a lot. The way you described the background is praise-worthy. And the plot is interesting too. Good work! Keep going!

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I don't exactly know what happened but I spent coins for my own work? 🤔 Something is definitely wrong here, I can feel it!😂😂😂 anyways... please leave a review or vote people. Come on now, don't be shy, just click the vote button down there👇🏻 or write some rude reviews if you like, I won't read the rude comments anyway. 😂 Feel free though guys, and wish you all the best.

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Mel_Aniv
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Nice story development and amazing world-building. Meticulous in crafting the plot so well that made me inspired to write too. A likeable MC that was very enjoyable as a company while I read his story. Kudos!

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I a huge fan of video game novels so I was quite excited by the concept in the synopsis. Was quite excited to start reading until the MC got in the game. I don't know why I had this image in my head he was at least a good gamer. well color me shocked when my veteran gamer to throw a turntrum when he touched a dummy with a dagger and didn't do damage, when my veteran started running from a dummy. oh how I was heart broken.

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An age old Full dive MMORPG trope but the MC is really hilarious. Generally most of RPG's goes with a dark or cliched but this one is different. The subtle humor makes this a refreshing take on the game genre. Wish to more of this. Great Work!!!

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The concept for this book is incredible, and I'm hooked already! This book has the potential to become something amazing, my best wishes to the author!

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The revIews Before mine tell most the words i want to say. I’ll be frank just read It. ill ad comments as story progresses if needed. oh yea word count.

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Dark of night and waxing moon come to us a single pool hear us sing our witches' song and send us moonlight clear and strong Earth and water, wind and fire one and all you must conspire to banish bad for goodness sake cos I need moonshine for my cake Weary travelers long ago shared their bread and made a vow that they will be forever friends and so shall be until time ends

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So where to start, it's like you are lost and then among the whole forest filled with creepers, you find a watermelon. That's the feeling you get.

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