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LeeMaRi1999
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2021-04-08 22:47

Hey, you! Yes you! Are you looking for a refreshing novel to read? Well, here is mine! (Sorry I gotta promote my own novel, hahaha) First, this is an ORIGINAL novel that I created this is my first entry Spirity and I hopel lol you can show some love and support by leaving comments and powerstones! My writing style is quite simple don't you think? There will definitely be grammatical errors as English is only my third language. But I'll assure everyone that I'll definitely improve. klldld

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LeeMaRi1999
LeeMaRi1999Author

lol, I posted this review with too many errors. I might have been out of my mind 😂 must have been too sleepy 😅

author_aruel
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Heya, mind you the Joseon period began with the Joseon dinasty in the late 1300 s. You should update any date reference or change the period. The year 900 is know as The Three Kingdoms, in the historical region of Korea.

author_aruel
author_aruelLv11

A little research never hurt anyone ;)

author_aruel:Heya, mind you the Joseon period began with the Joseon dinasty in the late 1300 s. You should update any date reference or change the period. The year 900 is know as The Three Kingdoms, in the historical region of Korea.
LeeMaRi1999
LeeMaRi1999Author

My brain was not working. Lol. I meant this happened on the last year the three kingdoms era (Goguryeo, Silla and Baekje). That was the main reason why the girl had to unify the three kingdoms and make it into Goryeo. I never said it was Joseon era though, I think the FL mentioned it to compare the place to Joseon era since she wasn't that familiar with the custom of the era before that. And maybe I did a mistake once (mentioning about Joseon), but it disappeared in the sea of chapters. If you could point it out, I'd be happy. 🥰

author_aruel:A little research never hurt anyone ;)
LeeMaRi1999
LeeMaRi1999Author

And I don't know if you had read the story, but it is a parallel world created by the unknown since she transmigrated inside the painting itself so it might not even go and follow the real history of the country.

LeeMaRi1999:My brain was not working. Lol. I meant this happened on the last year the three kingdoms era (Goguryeo, Silla and Baekje). That was the main reason why the girl had to unify the three kingdoms and make it into Goryeo. I never said it was Joseon era though, I think the FL mentioned it to compare the place to Joseon era since she wasn't that familiar with the custom of the era before that. And maybe I did a mistake once (mentioning about Joseon), but it disappeared in the sea of chapters. If you could point it out, I'd be happy. 🥰
LeeMaRi1999
LeeMaRi1999Author

I understand where you're coming from. If you only read the synopsis of the story, the artist of the painting was the only one from the Joseon era not that she transmigrated into it. A LITTLE BIT OF READING COMPREHENSION SHOULD BE USED FROM YOU AS WELL. :)

author_aruel
author_aruelLv11

Then check your synopsis ;).

LeeMaRi1999:My brain was not working. Lol. I meant this happened on the last year the three kingdoms era (Goguryeo, Silla and Baekje). That was the main reason why the girl had to unify the three kingdoms and make it into Goryeo. I never said it was Joseon era though, I think the FL mentioned it to compare the place to Joseon era since she wasn't that familiar with the custom of the era before that. And maybe I did a mistake once (mentioning about Joseon), but it disappeared in the sea of chapters. If you could point it out, I'd be happy. 🥰
LeeMaRi1999
LeeMaRi1999Author

It is what it is. The painting is from the Joseon era and she transmigrated into the year 918.

author_aruel:Then check your synopsis ;).
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