Here are my honest thoughts about this novel based from what I read so far, World Building: I do really like the concept of worldbuilding in this novel. It give a sense of Sci-Fi or futuristic with a mix of an alien race to make it more exciting to read. The lore in this story is also explained quite well. However, I suggest to give detailed, vivid imagery, and even the showing to make the worldbuilding more fun to read. Character: To be honest, I do really like the character so far especially on their appearance or personality. They are all distinct especially with the main character and I do believe the author will give the side character development since from the early chapter, you show Vivian which is the side character who her own chapter before she escaped with the help of the main characters. I also like how the author describes the character appearances especially on their eyes appearance or even the general one. Overall, that's all I have to say about this novel and I do believe it have a good potential. Keep up the good work!!
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