Review Detail of TheBearB13 in Grandmaster Of All Job Class

This is a story that, as of roughly chapter 30, I am quite liking. The descriptions of the author are evoking and overall well written. I certainly note some grammatical issues or sentence structure problems while reading (some sentences like 'The man ran. Around the room.') but it does not pull the reader too far from the story and it is easy enough to make sense of what is intended. Updates seem stagnant but author seemingly wrote one hundred seventy nine chapters and if they continue to be held to the same writing quality then it is worth looking forward to─ the story is not marked as complete but I assume that it is. The story is developing well, no real complaints aside from the side-story of the MC looking back on what happened to his hero-students dragging on for a surprisingly long time while not being a split story. With that side story the author in Chapter 27 finally introduced a skip-through-time element to that plot. I believe the entire side plot could have started at the heroes and Stephen training after Stephen had already learned classes and elements. That way you could have the chapter of side story, then do a chapter of scrying back in time (which he did anyways) where you briefly see their meeting, early training, and can then go further back in time to see Stephen's early childhood then the battle with the demons and Naphtalie's sacrifice. As it was done there was a LOT of detail within the side story that drew the reader away from the actual plot─ if it is designed as a parallel plot then for author's future writings I hope they transition more fluidly between them (maybe add in more comments of 'Joan looked on' or the like). As written it almost felt like a separate book entirely, but overall very good development if a bit lengthy. Quite a few characters have been introduced already throughout the story and while some may feel cliché or one dimensional we do see actual growth with those we stick around. A rather large universe has been introduced and though only minor sections of the worlds themselves have truly been touched on the potential is there for massive development and I look forward to seeing it happen. Overall; I enjoy this story, it is not the 'greatest story ever' but that would be a hard thing to be in the first place, haha. This story has an interesting premise, rather pleasing descriptions, and is developing well and seems to have potential for extensive worldbuilding (which I tend to favor) ─ it is one I would recommend to others. I tend to be picky but try to remain logical with my ratings & I hope this provides feedback that benefits the author in future works, any critical statement made is designed with the intentions of helping the author improve.