I think this novel has an interesting and yet fascinating concept in my opinion. First of all, the magic in this world is works like an RPG game which is quite unique and the author gives a quite good explanation at the same time. The main character in this one, Joan is also pretty decent compare to some reincarnation novels which is he isn't whiny or I can say quite wise just like he previous life self. However, there is some cons in my opinion which is if you write a long dialogue, I guess it's better to give some space or make into a new paragraph. I think that's all I have to say and thank you. Keep up the good work!!
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