Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike ;) I love that Diablo inspires your writing. The concept of reoccurring lives makes for a great foundation for a long-running story. For whoever reads this; if this story isn't your cup of tea, Mel here has numerous original works to chose from that would fit nicely alongside the rest of your webnovel collection.
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LIKEMel_Aniv:Wow, thanks! Diablo player here! 😉 What class do you like? hehe
NomsterWasHere:I'm trash, but whirlwind barb or crusader makes me feel less trash lol