Writing quality and word building is good but cultivation base balance is off the chart, how come measly qi condensation cultivator attack can be threat to a nascent soul cultivator
Idczhen
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LIKEI totally agree with your concern because it seemed unrealistic. I do want to clarify one thing is that because Yang Wei's soul originated from Earth and it has been hinted multiple time that his soul is many times more powerful than the cultivators in this world. So, whenever he stay in an extreme focus state and used all his true qi, his attack could be a threat but it's just a threat. If the Nascent soul cultivator is cautious and prepared, they can nullify the attack easily. Anyway, Thank you for the review, I really appreciate your support. <3