Review Detail of Minxs in The Most Wanted Across The Multiverse
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Good story so far. Based on the title and what we read, guess the guys is a master theif. From all the good books I have ever read, the direction of the story is noticeable in the first 5-6 chapters. Not saying this is a 100% gurantee, but it definitely helps to set the plot and foundation of the story. Also, the character dialogue is solid but could be a bit more natural. Im specifically refering to the banter between friends. It seems a little scripted, if that makes sense(even though its a writing lol). I would say too not force the jokes and just let them come naturally as you are writing it. If you get, you get it, if you don't, you don't, not to big of a deal. Last thing I would suggest is more detailed descriptions of buildings, fighting scenes, and emotions. The strongest point i see from this novel is its unique MC. Pretty cool robin hood vibes from the story. Have not read anything like this on Webnovel so do a good job with it, Author-san! :) lol gl
The Most Wanted Across The Multiverse
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As a first-time writer as well, I personally try to write like I was talking to my friends. On top of that, I draw inspiration from other books writing styles. Not saying plagiarism of their ideas, but more so into how they write their characters. You tend to find a good idea of what you want your MC to be like through reading about others. This also applies to their worlds. I usually just take a screenshot of certain paragraphs I like and leave those as a reminder for my own book. For example, I read a book that had a really interesting cultivation system. When they were describing it, I thought it was amazing. It had a twist of science behind the mythology. When I wrote my own cultivation, I tried to make sure it kept that unique realism. Hopefully this helps!
Omara_Ai:Mmmh! ty. i think i get better everytime in writing but I also fear in messin up. hope I'll captivate others like you
Minxs:As a first-time writer as well, I personally try to write like I was talking to my friends. On top of that, I draw inspiration from other books writing styles. Not saying plagiarism of their ideas, but more so into how they write their characters. You tend to find a good idea of what you want your MC to be like through reading about others. This also applies to their worlds. I usually just take a screenshot of certain paragraphs I like and leave those as a reminder for my own book. For example, I read a book that had a really interesting cultivation system. When they were describing it, I thought it was amazing. It had a twist of science behind the mythology. When I wrote my own cultivation, I tried to make sure it kept that unique realism. Hopefully this helps!