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Story straight up makes no sense. Author clearly does not know what story passing and proper development is, and cannot properly narrate the story as their is a lack of explanation for the plot. Simply put only the author would truly understand the story, since whatever the story is only fully narrated in his head. Overall: Garbage tier writing/execution.

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Monarch of Darkness, Arsene

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Patrik_Crown
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Hey there, I see you made some trustful review. Would you be interested in reviewing mine as well? I understand if not, but some criticism would be refreshing, pointing out some mistakes I probably made. Reply to this if you're interested. Thanks...