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Naavis
NaavisLv43yr
2021-08-09 06:51

If you don't have a good level of english then pass on this novel. Plenty of the words used are wrongly writen, especially the use of were - where - we're or your - you're - yours, etc. The use of ',' is also trashy. Writing quality is deplorable. That aside, characters dont really mean much emotionally. You see them, they die. Thoigh I have never read a novel with a main character like this so it's kinda nice. Cultivation is a mess but I dont really care personally. Never really paid attention to it. To me this novel is just to kill time and read without pondering too deeply while at the same time training your english to find spelling mistakes. cheers

Monarch of Darkness, Arsene

Lord_Damocles
4.3
1318 Chs

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Patrik_Crown
Patrik_CrownLv12

Hey there, I see you made some trustful review. Would you be interested in reviewing mine as well? I understand if not, but some criticism would be refreshing, pointing out some mistakes I probably made. Reply to this if you're interested. Thanks...

1yr
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Lord_Damocles
Lord_DamoclesAuthor

Shhhhh🤫 Just let this review happen. It's not shamelessness...maybe🙄 Follow your favorite cannibal as he travels the world. There will be romance, there will be action, there will be booty, but most of all there will be a feast...if you catch my drift. 😗

4yr

tanu_sam
tanu_samLv14

Synopsis hooked me😂😂😂 So I thought why not. A great read. I hope ppl will give this one a chance and they should! A fantastic book actually All the best 🧡🧡🧡 Keep it up💓💓

4yr
CriticalReader
CriticalReaderLv2

Like majority of novels on this site, it starts out well only to become unbearable, cringy and embarrassing to read. Decent quality of writing, with little errors but poor sentence structure... 3 stars Updates are reliable... 3 stars Story development involves almost every single character trying to kill mc with no reason and mc fighting them in retaliation... so plot is nonexistent and in its place is the typical angst and drama associated with silly revenge novels... 1 star because I can't give zero Character design amounts to mc, fmc and everyone else... all characters beside mc and fmc have changes in behavior for plot convenience (eg: his parents who are rebellious turn meek and cowardly so that mc's enemies can attack him, all so that mc can have his edgy revenge arcs... yes they are only revenge arcs so far)... I give this 1 star otherwise i would give it zero Worldbuilding involves mentioning of location names... no place is described hence impossible to imagine... 2 stars

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kendell_fisher
kendell_fisherLv14

This novel is one of the best On site hands down so many Writers fail to establish a romance that doesn’t make the Mc a simp or alows a side character to outshine the Mc, while at the same time The side characters have their own destiny and are not riding the coat tail of the Mc to gain power ups, his Potential girlfriend does not use him like in many stories on this site 😤🤷🏾‍♂️ she has her own goals and is just a ruthless as the Mc without out shining the Mc or slowing the the pace of the story down, you writers out there that Lie about ruthless Mcs in your description eat your hearts out 🖕🏾and leaRn something from this master writer 😁 world building need some work but other than that Great work 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾

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Tartiris_
Tartiris_Lv3

Story straight up makes no sense. Author clearly does not know what story passing and proper development is, and cannot properly narrate the story as their is a lack of explanation for the plot. Simply put only the author would truly understand the story, since whatever the story is only fully narrated in his head. Overall: Garbage tier writing/execution.

2yr
Percent_Grader
Percent_GraderLv4

He changes how the Mc normally acts when around love interest for example when she lives in his home temporarily she invites her friend to live with her he normally would have kicked her out but decides to do nothing. Said friend poisons Mc instead of killing her he just leaves her be with no hard feelings.

3yr
Lecc
LeccLv14

60 chapters in, I still don't understand even a speck of what is going on, no character makes sense, plotlines are convoluted and twisted, this whole "oh I'm a cannibal" thing never stops. I'm up for many things specially with evil MC, but one thing I just can't deal with is the pleasure of human meat. It's just absolutely upsetting. Oh and btw using a D20 dice although it sounds fun as a writer, it makes readers face too many confusing events.

3yr
raj114
raj114Lv4

i usually read 50 chapter before continue or drop a novel but i drop this at C41........the plot are a mess...i dont understand where the story is going,this is chinese cultivation with western setting then hes kowtowing to his parents before leaving them....i dont understand the setting anymore...he act live evil n cruel MC then act like beta simp to the girl his mother force on him cuz he wont say no to his mother...then he leave the family home bringing the girl with him...she gonna ask for food n all then hes gonna think its so annoying but still do what she ask...hes leaving the family when theres lot of people targetting him even the king...i dont know if his guards that much stronger to protect him... I really like the concept of this novel with a EVIL CANNIBAL MC wreaking havoc in the world...i never read a novel with cannibal mc before so that kinde new but NOT gonna torture myself with this one....

2yr
sayan_samanta
sayan_samantaLv1

Review after reading 150 chapters: Don't read this novel, if you hate some disgusting stuff like cannibalism, child abuse, etc. MC is a cannibal & child abuser. Also, the storyline is very confusing and not worth reading & spending money on.

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