Review Detail of Divine_univers in The Retribution of a Cursed Swordsman
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honestly speaking Kalos naivety is a double edged sword that makes him likeable but also frustrating so far as a character. I understand the premise of him being young and ignorant but the way he's being used and abused in the first 30 chapters seems to be a bit much for him to not notice his father is using him and lying to him. Besides that though the story so far is good and I'm looking forward to his development just hope he uses his head a bit more.
The Retribution of a Cursed Swordsman
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isn't that like, an advantage to the story though. You say it's a double edged sword cause it makes him both likeable and frustrating as a character. Thing is I wouldn't say that him being frustrating is a bad thing. By itself him being a frustrating character is bad, but remember he is also likeable. Him being both likeable and frustrating adds to his character and development so like...I only see pluses. Essentially I am requesting you change
I'm just saying that his naivety is frustrating cause at least at the beginning it makes no sense with the situation at least to me.
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