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2021-04-04 03:20

Wowww..A very well thought out story, I can see that author has put real efforts after reading the current chapters, World background is interesting and story development is simply awesome along Good character design... The writing can be done better but since Author's first language is not English ( just like me ) so it's ok ( since Im also noob, I don't have right to say this lol ) The story starts with multiple character and and adventure with Princes and princesses of Vampire, Wolf, Dragon, witches, demon and other races so it's bound to be interesting and exciting with the adventure and when u add Royal romance into it, Along with curse(real witch curse) , Fate and... love. what else do you need? Go read chapters and stop reading review lol.

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