Item: His obsessive love
Rating: 5
Author: Bad_Totodile

Bad_TotodileLv33yr

2021-04-03 20:00

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His obsessive love

RukhsarQadir

5.0

15 Chs

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RukhsarQadirAuthor

Yep thanks croco

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THE_WORDSMITHLv2

The story is compelling and I want to know what happened that ruined them. Some subtle touches, such as hiding the pain, yet unable to do so. The expressions described as the characters act in the scene are also fine. I am looking forward to the updates.

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Zero_ThingsLv11

The story is great. I don't know much about these romance novels but this is pretty good, The first chapter is written in a way where it will capture your interest without making you feel board as you read. The author also makes you want to find out more about there characters. Such as what did Adam do? And why is his mom in critical care? Did he try to kill her or something? It is kinda rare to read a first chapter and have no idea where the rest of the novel will go but it is a nice change of pace to read something with a little bit of mystery instead of being filled with cliches. Keep up the good work

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VerhygoLv12

I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 4. (Because there wasn't more published yet.) Writing Quality: I didn't notice any grammar mistakes whatsoever. Descriptions are well though out and give you a good impression on the feelings and goals the characters have. Story Development: The story develops at a comfortable speed. First of starts the introduction of, what I suppose is the male lead, Adam. The secret he carries around gives a good incentive to read further. Similarly is the female lead, Aayat, like Adam introduced at an emotional low point. A mirror of the other character. She has also something on her heart, what I suspect is related to the secret of Adam. I suppose they are connected by the same event. Suspension is kept through that introduction and makes on want to read further. Character Design: Both characters are well established, emotions established in a relatable way. It's an inner struggle present, as well as an outer conflict. You get to know who both are and what they want. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: Family and side characters, as well as their relationship to the main characters get established in a natural way. You see how they stand to each other with their reactions and how they talk with one another. Summary: It's a dramatic story as far as I can tell. Not really something I usually enjoy. Still, I can feel that it really captured my attention.

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Itx_MahiLv1

Character Development Is perfect 😇 The main Attraction Was the Book Cover Which is Quiet Creative N Hides a lot of Feelings Inside it😍😍 N the synopsis Was Awesome😉 I Loved The way How the Dearly Dear Author Wrote the Story in🤗🤗 If U guys R Interested In Romance Genre Then What R U waiting For? Do add This Novel To ur Library N start Readinggggg!! Hehe😄 M Looking forward To New Chapters☺ Dear Author Write More N more with the same passion😇 We all Loved this Novel N ur talent💕 We all need More Chapters ❤

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Dumpling_AuntLv3

This book is so well written.. the author is quite talented in connecting the readers emotions. I love the plot and the characters. This story is a gem. I hope it deserves the attention it gets. keep going author 💟

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BrainFrogLv2

I will say that normally these sorts of stories aren't my cup of tea, but already there's a lot of groundwork being laid for a very interesting series of events. The characters are all very multi-layered and have quite a few interesting facets to them- I'm very curious to see where this is going to go!

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MisumiLv1

I really liked this book, even when Ms. author is describing such painful and tragic memories a sense of calmness is detected in her narration. I read the first 2 chapters I was hooked!! Her other book I HATE THAT I LOVE YOU is as well quite a success she's bound to be recognized as a commendable author soon inshallah! So best luck with lots of love to Ms. rukhsar and her books. So definitely read this book, as slowly the mistress of romantic tragedy unravels her marvelous heart-shattering story.

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Copper_maskLv11

I am an avid fan of romance novels. And this one has me sucked straight in from the summary. I hope the author will publish more chapters because I can't wait for enough for them. Author if you are reading this - We Want More Chappies.......

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docaquiLv11

while writing this review.. i've only read the first chapter but the story had already hooked me up and wud want to read more. the author is really good at portraying the characters properly.. great job author

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