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2021-08-23 00:19

Character Development Is perfect 😇 The main Attraction Was the Book Cover Which is Quiet Creative N Hides a lot of Feelings Inside it😍😍 N the synopsis Was Awesome😉 I Loved The way How the Dearly Dear Author Wrote the Story in🤗🤗 If U guys R Interested In Romance Genre Then What R U waiting For? Do add This Novel To ur Library N start Readinggggg!! Hehe😄 M Looking forward To New Chapters☺ Dear Author Write More N more with the same passion😇 We all Loved this Novel N ur talent💕 We all need More Chapters ❤

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Verhygo
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I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 4. (Because there wasn't more published yet.) Writing Quality: I didn't notice any grammar mistakes whatsoever. Descriptions are well though out and give you a good impression on the feelings and goals the characters have. Story Development: The story develops at a comfortable speed. First of starts the introduction of, what I suppose is the male lead, Adam. The secret he carries around gives a good incentive to read further. Similarly is the female lead, Aayat, like Adam introduced at an emotional low point. A mirror of the other character. She has also something on her heart, what I suspect is related to the secret of Adam. I suppose they are connected by the same event. Suspension is kept through that introduction and makes on want to read further. Character Design: Both characters are well established, emotions established in a relatable way. It's an inner struggle present, as well as an outer conflict. You get to know who both are and what they want. Update stability: What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess... World Background: Family and side characters, as well as their relationship to the main characters get established in a natural way. You see how they stand to each other with their reactions and how they talk with one another. Summary: It's a dramatic story as far as I can tell. Not really something I usually enjoy. Still, I can feel that it really captured my attention.

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