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PaleTwilight
PaleTwilightAuthor4yr
2021-04-02 00:01

A Shameless 5 Star Review From the Author. Heads up to all of you! This is my first novel joined in a contest. Please support my other book if you liked this one! Things to Remember 1. Grammar and I are still not that close, please bear with us! 2. Don't kill me if you hated how I gave a very odd cheat to the MC. 3. The story plot is chaotic! I apologize in advance. 4. I need a plumbing paste for the plot holes that might appear in between chaps. 5. Futuristic setting has different views depending on Author's perspective, if you want to see people using laser guns, this is not the right place! 6. Characters will be as crazy as the author! How crazy can they get? Even I don't know? 7. If you have something to tell about the story like how dope the MC is, feel free to comment! I'll try to respond to everyone. 8. Last but not the least! Enjoy the story and have fun! 9. Lastest but not the leastest! Please support the story! The author is pleading you to do it! If you support the story, may Urie's prowess affect all the games you're playing! That's all!

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PaleTwilight
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kadethornbush
kadethornbushLv14

Pros: - I love the tamer theme for the story - I also like reading about people being stuck in a VR and like someone said early this is inquie being that he has his brother with him. Cons: - I already started disliking the concept after he recieved the Slim Gloves but was willing to look past it until he literally caught the final evolution to the beast he already has smh. - Hate the black egg Item he recieved right after getting an op gloves like wasnt that enough.

3yr

kuhaku_sora
kuhaku_soraLv3

I really like these sort of stories where the main protagonist gets trapped inside a game. This story explores more options like the main protagonist is with his brother. Not many stories have this kind of setup! Good luck building up your world and its sytem, mate! ^^

4yr
GCarre
GCarreLv11

The catchy plot is interesting to read through. The author made a unique story in a trapped-glitch game cliche that everyone should follow up and read every coming chapter

3yr
varean
vareanLv2

I'm not much of a system reader because I get so confused. But as I'm reading the chapters of this novel, I can't help but be amazed. The writing is excellent; very descriptive, and precise. I went on reading without even knowing how far I've gone. The plot is interesting; I can't wait to see what will happen in the future chapters. Good job to the author and all the best!

3yr
koppa_feel
koppa_feelLv1

So, the “stuck in game” plot has been done so many times that I can’t even count, but this is still such a good read! The beast taming and the game mechanics all work together. It’s just great. Author-sama! Keep it up, fighting!

3yr
yohan26_
yohan26_Lv3

I love this story.. this is so lit, I am in so much awe while reading every chapters..the way you write the events are so amazing..it is written in detailed and understandable words.Highly recommended..I am wishing you author the success..thank you for writing this wonderful book..

3yr
Bad_Totodile
Bad_TotodileLv3

I like this, It was a very Noice Story.............................................................................................................................................

4yr
Madyan_wani
Madyan_waniLv10

I love the plot. Kudos to the author. You really described story well. How will the protagonist end up huh? Hey you ,yes you there. Grab this novel and give it a read. A worth reading novel it is!

4yr
Monachre
MonachreLv3

To be honest, I'm not a fan of game stuff but this exceeds my expectations. I'm glad that I was able to find thia novel over thousand books here. Good job author

4yr
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