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Like the idea of a wolf mc but you narrating his lifestyle of just hunting is boring and we didn't even see if he is really getting stronger. I was hoping he has some kind of vague feeling of how strong he has or what kind of ability did he gain or some kind of status viewer cause all readers love status viewers.
New Life (Overlord Fanfic)
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For the status viewer there will be a little of it in the story, I don't want to make the MC overly OP because in my eyes he is already OP. But I will create an auxiliary chapter after the MC fully realised his power, maybe. About how strong the MC is I will use Overlord method for it, which is comparing something with something, and of course, I will use the classic method, brute force that is. Thank for the review though.
the thing you are talking about here is a system, the status he talks about is only the view of his stats and skills, there is no shop, gacha and quests in the status. It's true that a system would make the MC OP, but the status only shows him the fruit of his training and his survival. In other words it would be a help for the MC but also for us reader to easily visualize his capacities.
Rindan:I disagree that ALL readers love visual status. I hate him, especially if this status does not respect common sense (shops, gachas, illogical questos).
Rindan:I disagree that ALL readers love visual status. I hate him, especially if this status does not respect common sense (shops, gachas, illogical questos).