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Yorky_Man
Yorky_ManLv143yrYorky_Man

Am a huge fan of fan fiction and love "overlord" I clicked on this story as the title is overlord but all i read was a guy who wakes up as a wolf! its 10 chapters in and all the story is focusing is what the wolf mc is hunting and finding shelter. there's nothing else apart from that. I would like to say kudos to the author as your writing is really good. bad points is that its boring.

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New Life (Overlord Fanfic)

Birdinthesky

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Birdinthesky
BirdintheskyAuthorBirdinthesky

First of all, I'm sorry to not meet your expectations. For the story part, I don't want to rush it out, I want the story to have some foothold where the MC can develop later on in the story. To be honest, I'm too huge fan of Overlord, it's one of my favourite anime of all time, the characters are very well developed and Maruyama-sensei world-building is very captivating, I guess three seasons of anime are not just for show. My goal for the story is to make it as similar as possible with Overlord but not completely copying it to create my own writing style in the future. If you are still interested in the story, check it out I just release a new chapter, it's a story about Toadman Clan and how they cope with their problem. Yes, it is a side story, I don't want the story to only focus on the MC, I want to show how the people of that world live. Maybe that's enough, it getting too long. Thanks for the review and the kudos though, really appreciate that.

Infamous_Fitz
Infamous_FitzLv2Infamous_Fitz

Exactly and it's not like evolved once he got a certain amount of strength but no. And it's not like the author shows any indication of what world he was in

Dao_Master211
Dao_Master211Lv6Dao_Master211

I was hoping he has some kind of re monster abilities but it was so boring. I didn't even finish chapter 3 and now I'm out lol.

Infamous_Fitz:Exactly and it's not like evolved once he got a certain amount of strength but no. And it's not like the author shows any indication of what world he was in
Yorky_Man
Yorky_ManLv14Yorky_Man

the only difference between chapter 3 and 10 is the wolf is banging his head against trees to check his strenght.

AlphaZwei
AlphaZweiLv5AlphaZwei

Sooo... What is exactly the Overlord part of this story? Because, without golden finger or anything else, not even evolution, your MC will only be a slave when those Yggdrassil players come.