Am a huge fan of fan fiction and love "overlord" I clicked on this story as the title is overlord but all i read was a guy who wakes up as a wolf! its 10 chapters in and all the story is focusing is what the wolf mc is hunting and finding shelter. there's nothing else apart from that. I would like to say kudos to the author as your writing is really good. bad points is that its boring.

I want to see Overlord but it gives me the boring daily life of wolf mc...especially he can't evolve.........................................

I came here for overlord fic not furry mc 😔😔😔............................................................................................

I'm only going to talk about the development of the story... I wouldn't say it's catastrophic, just boring. I mean by that we see a daily dairy, but this is not the problem, I will give an example, imagine you read a story about the daily life of a young man who never leaves his room and spends his time eating, lazing and sleeping. it's almost exactly the same feeling one can get from this novel. Of course I can understand that this is done on purpose, whether to immerse the reader in history, be able to feel what the MC feels and have the same knowledge of the world around him. But we have the impression that there is no real progress between each chapter, as if there was no achievement or goal gained at the end of these.

Like the idea of a wolf mc but you narrating his lifestyle of just hunting is boring and we didn't even see if he is really getting stronger. I was hoping he has some kind of vague feeling of how strong he has or what kind of ability did he gain or some kind of status viewer cause all readers love status viewers.

I would say that though the story is a bit confusing and a little boring at first the care and love given to the character development is very rare and detailed, even if we compare with originals. Though the story is slow, the laidbackness gives it a harmony between all elements There are a few grammatical errors here and there

la historia en general es bastante aburrida, lei como 11 o 12 caps, la lectura es buena, vine porque decía overlord y como muchos soy fan y esperaba algo acerca de ello algo interesante, pero hasta ahora de overlord a lo sumo será el mundo nada mas, además se trata de la vida de un lobo(la parte positiva es que no tiene problemas con matar, si no lo hubiera dejado de leer antes) los capítulos se basan en conversaciones internas y un avance un poco lento en poder de un lobo, nada mas por lo que si el autor lee esto no se cual es tu idea de la novela pero estos capítulos no entretienen

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