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Yorky_Man
Yorky_ManLv143yr
2021-04-03 07:28

Am a huge fan of fan fiction and love "overlord" I clicked on this story as the title is overlord but all i read was a guy who wakes up as a wolf! its 10 chapters in and all the story is focusing is what the wolf mc is hunting and finding shelter. there's nothing else apart from that. I would like to say kudos to the author as your writing is really good. bad points is that its boring.

New Life (Overlord Fanfic)

Birdinthesky
4.2
20 Chs

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Infamous_Fitz
Infamous_FitzLv2

Exactly and it's not like evolved once he got a certain amount of strength but no. And it's not like the author shows any indication of what world he was in

3yr
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Dao_Master211
Dao_Master211Lv6

I was hoping he has some kind of re monster abilities but it was so boring. I didn't even finish chapter 3 and now I'm out lol.

Infamous_Fitz:Exactly and it's not like evolved once he got a certain amount of strength but no. And it's not like the author shows any indication of what world he was in
3yr
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Yorky_Man
Yorky_ManLv14

the only difference between chapter 3 and 10 is the wolf is banging his head against trees to check his strenght.

3yr
Birdinthesky
BirdintheskyAuthor

First of all, I'm sorry to not meet your expectations. For the story part, I don't want to rush it out, I want the story to have some foothold where the MC can develop later on in the story. To be honest, I'm too huge fan of Overlord, it's one of my favourite anime of all time, the characters are very well developed and Maruyama-sensei world-building is very captivating, I guess three seasons of anime are not just for show. My goal for the story is to make it as similar as possible with Overlord but not completely copying it to create my own writing style in the future. If you are still interested in the story, check it out I just release a new chapter, it's a story about Toadman Clan and how they cope with their problem. Yes, it is a side story, I don't want the story to only focus on the MC, I want to show how the people of that world live. Maybe that's enough, it getting too long. Thanks for the review and the kudos though, really appreciate that.

3yr
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AlphaZwei
AlphaZweiLv5

Sooo... What is exactly the Overlord part of this story? Because, without golden finger or anything else, not even evolution, your MC will only be a slave when those Yggdrassil players come.

3yr
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Luxanna_
Luxanna_Lv1

I want to see Overlord but it gives me the boring daily life of wolf mc...especially he can't evolve.........................................

3yr

Dfransginola
DfransginolaLv5

I came here for overlord fic not furry mc 😔😔😔............................................................................................

3yr
Delfreed
DelfreedLv3

I'm only going to talk about the development of the story... I wouldn't say it's catastrophic, just boring. I mean by that we see a daily dairy, but this is not the problem, I will give an example, imagine you read a story about the daily life of a young man who never leaves his room and spends his time eating, lazing and sleeping. it's almost exactly the same feeling one can get from this novel. Of course I can understand that this is done on purpose, whether to immerse the reader in history, be able to feel what the MC feels and have the same knowledge of the world around him. But we have the impression that there is no real progress between each chapter, as if there was no achievement or goal gained at the end of these.

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Dao_Master211
Dao_Master211Lv6

Like the idea of a wolf mc but you narrating his lifestyle of just hunting is boring and we didn't even see if he is really getting stronger. I was hoping he has some kind of vague feeling of how strong he has or what kind of ability did he gain or some kind of status viewer cause all readers love status viewers.

3yr
Shrijan_Dahal
Shrijan_DahalLv1

I would say that though the story is a bit confusing and a little boring at first the care and love given to the character development is very rare and detailed, even if we compare with originals. Though the story is slow, the laidbackness gives it a harmony between all elements There are a few grammatical errors here and there

3yr
Zeroz7
Zeroz7Lv3

la historia en general es bastante aburrida, lei como 11 o 12 caps, la lectura es buena, vine porque decía overlord y como muchos soy fan y esperaba algo acerca de ello algo interesante, pero hasta ahora de overlord a lo sumo será el mundo nada mas, además se trata de la vida de un lobo(la parte positiva es que no tiene problemas con matar, si no lo hubiera dejado de leer antes) los capítulos se basan en conversaciones internas y un avance un poco lento en poder de un lobo, nada mas por lo que si el autor lee esto no se cual es tu idea de la novela pero estos capítulos no entretienen

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LordFangYuan
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