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FNU_LNU
FNU_LNULv43yr
2021-05-19 00:28

all hail translator stupidity (wanted to use r word, but will probably be censored). ffs they cant keep name of MC consistent for first 30 chapters. idk if it was westernization or MTL, but whatever it is, it is bad translating job. btw this is translation review, not novel review...

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wajoli_zako
wajoli_zakoLv4

what is the r word?

VillagerAnonymous
VillagerAnonymousLv5

r*tard I would assume.

wajoli_zako:what is the r word?
Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

could also be r*pe

VillagerAnonymous:r*tard I would assume.
ultimatecoom
ultimatecoomLv3

Its mtl that is why

Southmonk
SouthmonkLv15

after chapter 30 its no longer consistent. there were 2 instances of confusing or obvious mtlness where words didnt make sense up to chapter 100 and quite a few spelling and grammar mistakes. ni stopped paying Fter chapter 100

Saint_Lewd
Saint_LewdLv4

I read through the bad translation and the quality picked up again after i think chpter 50 or 60

Komrade
KomradeLv1

why the h*ll would it be r*pe?

Immortal_Boomstick:could also be r*pe
Immortal_Boomstick
Immortal_BoomstickLv5

i just meant that the r word can mean other things than rtard in other cases in this case it probably is but the r word can mean lots of things.

Komrade:why the h*ll would it be r*pe?
Komrade
KomradeLv1

Ya but in this case its obvious it means rtard. because thats another word for stupidity

Immortal_Boomstick:i just meant that the r word can mean other things than rtard in other cases in this case it probably is but the r word can mean lots of things.
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