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Here's some tips. 1.your paragraphs are too damn long, long paragraphs are pain in the ass to read and most people tend to skip them.so shortening them to 4-6 lines per line break would be a good idea. 2.Need a cover, just any image which would fit within your novel's theme put it. 3.add scenario break, like imagine your whole chapter as a movie and add scenario breaks whenever its necessary. 4.avoid putting entire conversation description in capital letters, too much capital letters makes it have an ugly outlook. If you want to represent the conversation as screaming use exclamation or write it in. Eg. "What the hell are you doing !!?!!", tom screamed. -something like that its more neat that way.