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En mi opinión, no me gusto este fanfic por varias cosas,primero... salvo a Elia... solo por que era sexy y tal vez le sentia lastima... si quiere alguirn sexy salva a Lyanna, es sexy, le daria muy buena relación con los stark y por ende con Robert, aunque robert es un idiota y probablemente este follando con putas mientras esta casado. Le dara poder a la casa del mc, le dara un fuerte aliado igual al norte. Y mas con todos los posibles espias o traidores que pueden vender información de el por oro, esto evitaria que sea facilmente destruido. Pero salvando a Elia aunque le daria un aliado con la casa martell, pero Robert seria el maldito rey y con su orden las otras casas los destruirian,y en primera fila saldrian la casa baratheon,Stark, Lannister(por que Tywin no se quedaria quieto viendo un posible enemigo económico y con gusto le prestaria sus abanderados al rey) y de paso otras casas que querrian ganar el favor del rey... la casa martell no se arriesgaria a ir contra casi todo westeros solo por una persona,asi que yo prefiero una amistad con los stark y los baratheon que con los martell. Es una estupidez que solo por que este sexy o por que es genial o por que no se tal vez le da pesar por todo lo que ha pasado... pero estamos en un puto mundo donde las traiciones, violaciones, torturas, muestres es algo común. Incluso en nuestro mundo, asi que no fue una desicion muy inteligente Y la parte de perder 12 soldados solo por salvarla... fue algo muy idiota, 12 soldados perdidos por una mujer que no le dara nada,solo problemas. Yo hubiera preferidos salvar a Lyanna le daria poderosos aliados a el y su casa. Los lannister no podrian atacarlos directamente asi que... esa fue una de las razones por las cuales deje este libro La segunda,fue la traición de uno de sus comandantes (creo que era asi) qie era un espia de su madre... lo dejo ir sin mas, yo por mi parte como gobernante pondria mano dura y mostraria a mi ejercito que la traición no es una opción... en mi poa experiencia en guerra, creo que seria lo mejor,por que si lo dejo ir asi sin mas los posibles traidores inconcientemente no te tendran miedo, para mi un gobernante debe ser bueno con su gente y malo con sus enemigos, inteligente y compasivo, pero tambien debe poner mano dura. Incluso si era un espia de su madre y lo traicionó asi, aunque tambien fue un idiota en pensar que la mayoria de sus hombres serian leales a el por unos pocos años, incluso no me extrañaria si hubieran espias en sus filas Asi que fue una de las razones por las cuales deje de leerlo, pues no le vi futuro al protagonista en lo idiota que fue. Claro es mi punto de vista y se que el fanfic es del autor y el puede hacer lo que le venga en gana con el... pero aun sigo pensando que es un idiota

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