Review Detail of Glenstonx in Older

Just to review this: I'm sure this will be a fantastic story starting from so many questions about what is happening. However, I think you need to focus on the 'hooks' of each chapter cause personally, it doesn't make me want to go to the next page. But you have a great talent for wording and divisions of phrases that might have an impact on the readers, and for also building tensions. Good luck, author! rooting for you