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2022-03-15 21:29

After 3 or 4 stories full of disappointing ending, I was craving for some fluffs and romance and then I saw this book! It indeed has romance(though I kinda feel like it's more of romantic subplot) their first life time together brought me to tears!!! Anyway, let's start with the kids first. I like their characters and development a lot. They are geniuses and definitely OP sometimes and matured but still has the naivety, childishness and immaturity that a kid should have. Then there was the supporting characters like Shao Qiyang(😭😭😭), Tang Moling and Mu Xue. I kinda expected their ending the moment Tang Moling liked Mu Jingzhe so I am not that surprised that Qiyang and Mu Xue ended up together but still, I really think that Shao Qiyang is still too good for Mu Xue. Then there's Shao Qihai! At the middle of the story, I'm still neutral because I am still not sure who's going to be the final male lead but since Jingzhe and Qihai were married so I thought they'd be the end game so I'm kinda expecting for their interactions at the beginning. Later on, I realized that Shao Qihai has becoming more and more of a supporting character and he has no sweet interaction with Jingzhe like Ji Buwang does, that's why I've found out that he's not the male lead because he definitely doesn't have the male lead momentum and halo/aura. He's like a background character honestly, but I still felt sad for him. But compared with Buwang, he's definitely lacking so I'm not that sad that he and Jingzhe weren't the end game. And of course, there's Ji Buwang! I am still sad whenever I remember their first lifetime together. Why the need for that tragic ending? Though it's good that he and Jingzhe met again in the modern world, it's not enough. I want more extra chapters where I can guarantee that both of them reached a happy ending. Also, if I may add, I am quite satisfied and dissatisfied at the same time that he's a realistic character. He's not your typical overbearing and domineering CEO, he gave off the feeling that although he looks too good to be true, but not to the point that he's way too good and unrealistic. Maybe it's because of the setting where they are? And lastly, Mu Jingzhe, our FL. She's definitely like the other OP transmigrators(just like what she said) where they encounter setbacks but will always end up with series of face slapping and are considered a genius. She's a realistic character even if she's a transmigrator. She's not OP, not a god-like existence where she know everything or can learn anything quickly. The Shao siblings are even smarter that her in my opinion. But she, unlike the other transmigrators who are geniuses, gave a realistic feel. Overall, the story is good. The character development(especially of the children) is great too. The supporting characters are not just a mere background characters. Even Li Zhaodi, Mu Teng, Zhao Lan(😀), Shao Qiyun(🌡🀬), etc. are integral characters somehow. Aside from a few more special chapters, I've got nothing to ask.

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*definitely not like the other transmigrators

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